Bloom's Rhymes: A Poetic Exploration of Every Home and Light
Transcending the ordinary, every bloom she shares her light. These verses embark on a homely journey, blending the imagery of blooms with the concept of homes and light, through a series of 44 rhymes. Let's delve into the essence of this poetic exploration.
The Rhyme Scheme
Each line captures the magic of every bloom, marked by soothing imagery and an end rhyme with the word light. Here, we take a closer look at the first few rhymes:
1. With every bloom she shares her light,
2. In every room she shares her knight,
3. And after sex gives every wight,
4. A touch of clap to doom their night.
Further Rhymes
Continuing on, the rhymes uncover a range of images and sentiments:
5. With every bloom she shares her light,
6. She goes to bed and every night,
7. Every stranger she puts to rest,
8. Under her beating bosom by her bed.
The verses then delve into an exploration of solitude and abandonment:
9. Yet long yonder her beauty grew pale,
10. She grew so cold and her conscience ailed.
11. She felt no love for man or child,
12. For she sewn her seeds free and wild.
As the sentiment deepens, the rhymes reflect a shift in character:
13. Cold and dishonest and calculating she becomes,
14. When finally she drifted away to some,
15. Distant shore of fiery cays,
16. And she would one day rue for the sins she paid.
The narrative then touches upon a more homely and reflective tone:
17. That she was to be a man’s sole and only love,
18. But she abandoned him and he was all alone.
Quartzite and Other Rhymes
Extending to other forms of rhyme, the piece also includes:
Quartzite
19. Quartzite,
20. Not Zeitgeist,
21. But near quite,
22. Or for the purists and less uptight,
23. Yet more to the right,
24. Fools gold though im told is iron pyrite,
25. Thats why apartheid makes 44 unless Im not right.
The final rhyme harnesses the reference to numbers:
26. Why 44 well its just cat in base light,
27. Do I get a prize?
Homely Touches
Every bloom she shares her light specifically ends with home and the last word of every sentence rhymes with light:
28. With every bloom she shares her light,
29. Especially with her home in sight.
30. So far as I can tell this might be homework so you can do the other 43 times yourself.
Delve into this poetic exploration further to experience the interplay between light, bloom, and home.
Further Reading:
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